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	<title>Comments on: The Luxury of Revision</title>
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		<title>By: joanna</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127235</link>
		<dc:creator>joanna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Mar 2008 15:51:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Michelle does have a point about teaching at a cc --I'm not completely certain that university Basic Writing students are always the same population as those in the cc.  Or that the course is even the same from school to school.   Even though skills may not transfer step by step, there is a need for the instructors to cover (or re-cover) aspects of punctuation and mechanics that the students may not have understood the first time around.  The tricky thing is that the students often mistake grammar for writing, so you have to go at it in a way that makes it part of the whole process.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michelle does have a point about teaching at a cc &#8211;I&#8217;m not completely certain that university Basic Writing students are always the same population as those in the cc.  Or that the course is even the same from school to school.   Even though skills may not transfer step by step, there is a need for the instructors to cover (or re-cover) aspects of punctuation and mechanics that the students may not have understood the first time around.  The tricky thing is that the students often mistake grammar for writing, so you have to go at it in a way that makes it part of the whole process.</p>
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		<title>By: Collie</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127227</link>
		<dc:creator>Collie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Mar 2008 14:51:49 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127227</guid>
		<description>Michelle,
I've taught many sections of basic writing at a public university which may be similar to the community college situation after all, especially when you describe your students "skating."  Sounds familiar!  While it is maybe easier to play this game of pleasure-engagement with students who are more used to being engaged with school, my commitment to the approach is grounded in a wide range of classrooms.

Enough from me!  I'm beginning to sound didactic and stuck in my rut when really I think there are plenty of credible ways to teach well and to think about that work.

Good luck with your important curricular project -- necessary work, often thankless, resisted, but so necessary.

p.s.  I tried to comment on your blog, responding with concrete ways I "invite them in" but I'm not sure I did it right.  Oh well!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michelle,<br />
I&#8217;ve taught many sections of basic writing at a public university which may be similar to the community college situation after all, especially when you describe your students &#8220;skating.&#8221;  Sounds familiar!  While it is maybe easier to play this game of pleasure-engagement with students who are more used to being engaged with school, my commitment to the approach is grounded in a wide range of classrooms.</p>
<p>Enough from me!  I&#8217;m beginning to sound didactic and stuck in my rut when really I think there are plenty of credible ways to teach well and to think about that work.</p>
<p>Good luck with your important curricular project &#8212; necessary work, often thankless, resisted, but so necessary.</p>
<p>p.s.  I tried to comment on your blog, responding with concrete ways I &#8220;invite them in&#8221; but I&#8217;m not sure I did it right.  Oh well!</p>
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		<title>By: michelle</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127225</link>
		<dc:creator>michelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Mar 2008 14:39:51 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127225</guid>
		<description>In reading your entry again, I have to say that I agree with some of your sentiments; they're just not applicable to my situation. I teach developmental writing at a community college. My students are often fresh-faced eighteen year olds who have skated through the public education system without gaining the very basic skills they need to write anything at all coherently. They're also often single women who have gone back to school to become more educated and help their children with their work as they see their children in elementary school engaged in work (writing, etc.) already beyond their own capabilities. 

So this part, 

&lt;em&gt;whether that’s gaining ability to work more thoroughly with academic texts or researching and responding to internship opportunities.&lt;/em&gt;

while perhaps a worthwhile sentiment, is just not the same page I'm on. It is very important for me and others in my position to consider this in a step-by-step fashion and make sure that the skills are being built upon because I'm dealing with students who have missed out on skills that are elem and middle school level.

I'll say no more on the subject then! I think clearly this conversation is not applicable to me. I appreciate the opportunity to voice my thoughts in response, though (as always, Mike) because it's always helpful to me to identify and solidify my ideas to talk about it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reading your entry again, I have to say that I agree with some of your sentiments; they&#8217;re just not applicable to my situation. I teach developmental writing at a community college. My students are often fresh-faced eighteen year olds who have skated through the public education system without gaining the very basic skills they need to write anything at all coherently. They&#8217;re also often single women who have gone back to school to become more educated and help their children with their work as they see their children in elementary school engaged in work (writing, etc.) already beyond their own capabilities. </p>
<p>So this part, </p>
<p><em>whether that’s gaining ability to work more thoroughly with academic texts or researching and responding to internship opportunities.</em></p>
<p>while perhaps a worthwhile sentiment, is just not the same page I&#8217;m on. It is very important for me and others in my position to consider this in a step-by-step fashion and make sure that the skills are being built upon because I&#8217;m dealing with students who have missed out on skills that are elem and middle school level.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll say no more on the subject then! I think clearly this conversation is not applicable to me. I appreciate the opportunity to voice my thoughts in response, though (as always, Mike) because it&#8217;s always helpful to me to identify and solidify my ideas to talk about it.</p>
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		<title>By: Michelle</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127182</link>
		<dc:creator>Michelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Mar 2008 03:53:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127182</guid>
		<description>To address one part immediately, 

&lt;em&gt;I have little control over the curriculum or students’ transitions beyond my classes, and significant comp research indicates that concrete writing “skills” don’t seem to necessarily transfer across classes in tidy stepbystep fashion,&lt;/em&gt;

this is actually something that I'm charged with right now and that other people in gateway courses and beyond will soon be looking towards. We're trying to improve our curriculum to insure that it does help students out in a step by step fashion or at very least, they are prepared for the next course, and it's going to cause some ripples because not everyone is on the same page.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>To address one part immediately, </p>
<p><em>I have little control over the curriculum or students’ transitions beyond my classes, and significant comp research indicates that concrete writing “skills” don’t seem to necessarily transfer across classes in tidy stepbystep fashion,</em></p>
<p>this is actually something that I&#8217;m charged with right now and that other people in gateway courses and beyond will soon be looking towards. We&#8217;re trying to improve our curriculum to insure that it does help students out in a step by step fashion or at very least, they are prepared for the next course, and it&#8217;s going to cause some ripples because not everyone is on the same page.</p>
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		<title>By: Collie</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127146</link>
		<dc:creator>Collie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Mar 2008 15:31:20 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-127146</guid>
		<description>SERIOUS ABOUT PLAY

I'm working toward a work/play fusion - for me, for students in my classes,  for my staff of writing tutors as well.    Ideally: an integration of intellectual work/intellectual play in rhetorical environments worth the time and energy of everyone who enters.    Definitely not just pleasure for the sake of pleasure, nor even a spoonfulofsugar pedagogy.  I'm old, though, so I'm purely not willing to waste any more of my life in rooms of dread or duty, so I am wedded to a principle of pedagogical pleasure.

I can't bear to think of courses as just means to the next course.  (My middle schooler did the litany for me the other day:  "We have kindergarten so we can learn how to do first grade.  We have first grade so we can learn how to do second grade..."  I was a little horrified.)

Though I agree Michelle, that it's important for courses to have something to do with each other, and the concept of preparation has some merit.  Since I have little control over the curriculum or students' transitions beyond my classes, and significant comp research indicates that concrete writing "skills" don't seem to necessarily transfer across classes in tidy stepbystep fashion, I think it's important to be explicit with students that they are the ones who own the learning and have to figure out ways to adapt what they know for different contexts.  

I  try to conduct my courses so students are likely to 1) get/claim/discover real use value in the writing they do and 2) consciously transfer their developing rhetorical savvy to other writing situations.     One end of semester reflection on what they've learned doesn't cut it as an exercise in knowledge tranfer.  It's a constant insistence that students have the choice of permeating the borders of the classroom  by working on writing that is of consequence to them -- whether that's gaining ability to work more thoroughly with academic texts or researching and responding to internship opportunities.   

The work has to be useful to them (and me) on some level and there's got to be some pleasure in the learning or it just seems a task of mysterious origin.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>SERIOUS ABOUT PLAY</p>
<p>I&#8217;m working toward a work/play fusion - for me, for students in my classes,  for my staff of writing tutors as well.    Ideally: an integration of intellectual work/intellectual play in rhetorical environments worth the time and energy of everyone who enters.    Definitely not just pleasure for the sake of pleasure, nor even a spoonfulofsugar pedagogy.  I&#8217;m old, though, so I&#8217;m purely not willing to waste any more of my life in rooms of dread or duty, so I am wedded to a principle of pedagogical pleasure.</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t bear to think of courses as just means to the next course.  (My middle schooler did the litany for me the other day:  &#8220;We have kindergarten so we can learn how to do first grade.  We have first grade so we can learn how to do second grade&#8230;&#8221;  I was a little horrified.)</p>
<p>Though I agree Michelle, that it&#8217;s important for courses to have something to do with each other, and the concept of preparation has some merit.  Since I have little control over the curriculum or students&#8217; transitions beyond my classes, and significant comp research indicates that concrete writing &#8220;skills&#8221; don&#8217;t seem to necessarily transfer across classes in tidy stepbystep fashion, I think it&#8217;s important to be explicit with students that they are the ones who own the learning and have to figure out ways to adapt what they know for different contexts.  </p>
<p>I  try to conduct my courses so students are likely to 1) get/claim/discover real use value in the writing they do and 2) consciously transfer their developing rhetorical savvy to other writing situations.     One end of semester reflection on what they&#8217;ve learned doesn&#8217;t cut it as an exercise in knowledge tranfer.  It&#8217;s a constant insistence that students have the choice of permeating the borders of the classroom  by working on writing that is of consequence to them &#8212; whether that&#8217;s gaining ability to work more thoroughly with academic texts or researching and responding to internship opportunities.   </p>
<p>The work has to be useful to them (and me) on some level and there&#8217;s got to be some pleasure in the learning or it just seems a task of mysterious origin.</p>
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		<title>By: michelle</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-126838</link>
		<dc:creator>michelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Mar 2008 03:40:11 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-126838</guid>
		<description>I very much agree with you. Those are the students who I pull up the chair with and look straight in the eye and ask why, and then I tell them how it's not as confusing as they thought and not as magical, and that they, too, can find a way to write in an organized way that will get them through college. They are, by and far, glad to have specific direction.

Most of my students do not view it as doom and punishment; they merely view it as something unmastered.  They want to master something. Killing time until the end of class is a matter for only a small percentage of my students - I mean, the ones who stick around, of which I have a full class at least on MWF.

You could be specific, you know, about what you mean by inviting them in. I think I've been more specific in my criticism of creating assignments that do not prepare and why I'm criticizing it.

No worries about the commenting. I just didn't want to hijack your comments here with something that was a bit of a tangent.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I very much agree with you. Those are the students who I pull up the chair with and look straight in the eye and ask why, and then I tell them how it&#8217;s not as confusing as they thought and not as magical, and that they, too, can find a way to write in an organized way that will get them through college. They are, by and far, glad to have specific direction.</p>
<p>Most of my students do not view it as doom and punishment; they merely view it as something unmastered.  They want to master something. Killing time until the end of class is a matter for only a small percentage of my students - I mean, the ones who stick around, of which I have a full class at least on MWF.</p>
<p>You could be specific, you know, about what you mean by inviting them in. I think I&#8217;ve been more specific in my criticism of creating assignments that do not prepare and why I&#8217;m criticizing it.</p>
<p>No worries about the commenting. I just didn&#8217;t want to hijack your comments here with something that was a bit of a tangent.</p>
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		<title>By: mike</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-126830</link>
		<dc:creator>mike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Mar 2008 01:07:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>OK -- well, I'll comment there too, but here, I'll just say: for those students with fears, for whom it's a shitty, stupid, blank wall of a forbidding and resistant mystery -- is there something to be said for inviting them in; for showing them, "Here -- here's one reason somebody might want to do this -- it doesn't have to be doom and punishment -- try it, in a small way, for whatever reason you want, even if it's just to kill time 'til the end of class"?

(Sigh. There he goes. He's been &lt;a href="http://books.google.com/books?id=t2ypJjLMNrYC" rel="nofollow"&gt;into the Elbow&lt;/a&gt; again, hasn't he?)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK &#8212; well, I&#8217;ll comment there too, but here, I&#8217;ll just say: for those students with fears, for whom it&#8217;s a shitty, stupid, blank wall of a forbidding and resistant mystery &#8212; is there something to be said for inviting them in; for showing them, &#8220;Here &#8212; here&#8217;s one reason somebody might want to do this &#8212; it doesn&#8217;t have to be doom and punishment &#8212; try it, in a small way, for whatever reason you want, even if it&#8217;s just to kill time &#8217;til the end of class&#8221;?</p>
<p>(Sigh. There he goes. He&#8217;s been <a href="http://books.google.com/books?id=t2ypJjLMNrYC" rel="nofollow">into the Elbow</a> again, hasn&#8217;t he?)</p>
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		<title>By: michelle</title>
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		<dc:creator>michelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 04:58:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don't think that took. 


&lt;a href="http://minthediary.blogspot.com/2008/03/open-post.html" rel="nofollow"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t think that took. </p>
<p><a href="http://minthediary.blogspot.com/2008/03/open-post.html" rel="nofollow">here</a></p>
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		<title>By: michelle</title>
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		<dc:creator>michelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 04:53:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, point taken Mike about the itinerant aspect. And I know I blog a lot of personal crap, so that's why I created an extra special blog spot for this. http://minthediary.blogspot.com/2008/03/open-post.html. 

:)

This is interesting because I'm not all about making writing interesting. I want to help my students overcome fears of writing and lack of basic skills that the public education system has left them with, and help them learn how to write essays for college. That's it. I don't care if they like writing. I just want to demystify it for them and make them believe they can do it for the sake of their purpose.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, point taken Mike about the itinerant aspect. And I know I blog a lot of personal crap, so that&#8217;s why I created an extra special blog spot for this. <a href="http://minthediary.blogspot.com/2008/03/open-post.html." rel="nofollow">http://minthediary.blogspot.com/2008/03/open-post.html.</a> </p>
<p> <img src='http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>This is interesting because I&#8217;m not all about making writing interesting. I want to help my students overcome fears of writing and lack of basic skills that the public education system has left them with, and help them learn how to write essays for college. That&#8217;s it. I don&#8217;t care if they like writing. I just want to demystify it for them and make them believe they can do it for the sake of their purpose.</p>
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		<title>By: joanna</title>
		<link>http://www.vitia.org/wordpress/2008/02/26/the-luxury-of-revision/#comment-126727</link>
		<dc:creator>joanna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 02:26:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>And you never know what will strike a student's interest--and what they will return to as the semester moves on.  Sometimes it takes moving beyond a piece of writing into another one for it to make sense or context. 

I teach basic writing, composition, literature and creative writing, and I'm not certain which side of the aisle I'm on regarding Collie and Michelle's discussion--I think that what Collie is saying is that her bluntness and enthusiasm wakes up students who would otherwise snooze through out the semester, which doesn't seem to me to be creating a "fun" class filled with no expectations but plenty of laughs and inflated grades. And believe me, I can be "no fun" in a poetry writing class when the students are trying to slack off.  But the bottom line is that I can't instill a desire or appetite in every one and that has to do with reasons beyond my ken.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And you never know what will strike a student&#8217;s interest&#8211;and what they will return to as the semester moves on.  Sometimes it takes moving beyond a piece of writing into another one for it to make sense or context. </p>
<p>I teach basic writing, composition, literature and creative writing, and I&#8217;m not certain which side of the aisle I&#8217;m on regarding Collie and Michelle&#8217;s discussion&#8211;I think that what Collie is saying is that her bluntness and enthusiasm wakes up students who would otherwise snooze through out the semester, which doesn&#8217;t seem to me to be creating a &#8220;fun&#8221; class filled with no expectations but plenty of laughs and inflated grades. And believe me, I can be &#8220;no fun&#8221; in a poetry writing class when the students are trying to slack off.  But the bottom line is that I can&#8217;t instill a desire or appetite in every one and that has to do with reasons beyond my ken.</p>
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